Choosing the Right Point of View for Your Story

Selecting the right point of view (POV) is one of the most important decisions you’ll make as a writer. The POV shapes how readers experience your story, the depth of insight they get into characters, and the overall tone of your narrative. First-time authors may find it challenging to navigate the different options—first-person, third-person, or even second-person perspectives—but understanding each one can help you choose the best fit for your story.

First-Person Point of View

In first-person POV the story is told from the perspective of a character using "I" or "we." This allows readers to experience events directly through the narrator’s eyes, creating a deep connection with that character’s thoughts, emotions, and experiences. First-person is often used in coming-of-age stories, mysteries, or psychological thrillers where the narrator’s inner world is central to the plot.

However, first-person POV also comes with limitations. Since readers only see what the narrator sees, the perspective can be narrow and unreliable. If you want to explore the thoughts or actions of other characters, first-person may not be the best choice.

Example: The Catcher in the Rye by J.D. Salinger.

Third-Person Limited

Third-person limited uses "he," "she," or "they" and focuses on one character at a time, offering readers access to that character’s thoughts and feelings. This POV strikes a balance between intimacy and objectivity. While it provides insight into a single character’s inner world, it also allows the writer to describe scenes and events that the character might not be directly experiencing.

This is a flexible option that lets you zoom in on a character’s emotional state while still maintaining some distance, making it great for stories where the protagonist’s growth or journey is a central theme.

Example: Harry Potter series by J.K. Rowling.

Third-Person Omniscient

In third-person omniscient, the narrator knows everything about all characters and events in the story. This god-like narrator can jump from one character’s perspective to another, revealing thoughts, motives, and background information that no single character might know. Third-person omniscient is useful for epic tales with large casts of characters or complex plots.

However, this POV can be tricky to manage. It can feel distant or confusing if too many characters’ perspectives are explored without clear transitions.

Example: The Lord of the Rings by J.R.R. Tolkien.

Second-Person Point of View

Second-person POV uses "you" and is rarely used in fiction. It directly addresses the reader, placing them in the story as the protagonist. While this can create a unique, immersive experience, it’s often challenging to maintain without feeling forced. Second-person works best in experimental fiction or short stories.

Example: Bright Lights, Big City by Jay McInerney.

Choosing the Right POV

When choosing your POV, consider the level of intimacy you want with your characters and how much control you need over the story’s perspective. First-person and third-person limited offer a closer, more personal connection with characters, while third-person omniscient allows for broader storytelling. Whichever POV you choose, it should enhance the reader’s engagement with the story and align with your narrative goals.